四級作文經(jīng)典首段

四級作文經(jīng)典首段

由于四級考生的數(shù)量之多，老師們的批改任務(wù)重，瀏覽單份作文的時間就極其有限。因此文章首段，也就是第一印象很重要。這里，我們一起來看一下海倫·凱勒的作品《假如給我三天光明》，并將其改寫成四級作文首段。

I have often thought it would be ablessing if each human being were stricken blind and deaf for afew days at some time during his early adult life.Darkness would make him more appreciative of sight；silence would teach him the joys of sound.(3 days to see)

大意是：我一直認(rèn)為：如果一個人在人生中的早期有一段時間失明失聰，這將是一件非常美好的事情。黑暗使他更加珍惜視力；寂靜使他能夠體會到聲音的快樂。(請注意虛擬語氣的語法現(xiàn)象)

2009年12月真題：

1.建設(shè)校園十分重要

2.不僅是綠色環(huán)境

3.我們應(yīng)該怎么辦

首段：I have often thought it would be ablessing if each human being were sent to Pandora,a planet in Avatar,for afew days at some time during his early campus life.Primitive forest would make him more appreciative of environment；Navi,the residents there,would teach him the joys of cooperation.

大意是：我一直認(rèn)為：如果一個人在大學(xué)生活初期能有機會去電影阿凡達中的潘多拉星球待上幾天，這將是一件非常美好的事情。原始森林使他更加珍惜綠色環(huán)境；納威人教會他合作的樂趣。

2009年6月真題：

Free Admission to museums

越來越多的博物館免費對外開放的目的是什么?

也會帶來一些問題；

你的看法?

首段：I have often thought it would be ablessing if each human being were given free access to Museum forever.Historic relics would make him more familiar with the creature's evolution；Rough and archaic equipments displayed in Museum would teach him the joys of the application of modern science and technology.

大意是：我一直認(rèn)為：如果每一個人能永遠(yuǎn)免費去參觀博物館，這將是一件非常好的事情。歷史文物將使他熟悉生物進化的歷程；古老粗糙的工具設(shè)備使他體會到現(xiàn)如今高科技應(yīng)用的樂趣。

MSN（中國大學(xué)網(wǎng)）

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