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2002年10月托福滿分作文原文回憶錄
其實(shí)考完T的時(shí)候,只是感覺(jué)TWE還可以,估計(jì)肯定上了4分,但是對(duì)6分是沒(méi)敢奢望的。有一些朋友要我講一下作文準(zhǔn)備經(jīng)驗(yàn),我怕有些誤導(dǎo),因?yàn)槲沂窃谥婪趾蟛糯_認(rèn)我的觀點(diǎn)的。但是,ANYWAY,我還是很樂(lè)意把我的感受說(shuō)一說(shuō)。
作文摸板是要的,但是鑒于現(xiàn)在美國(guó)鬼子知道中國(guó)學(xué)生都用摸板,而且大都千篇一律,因此一定得有自己的特色,特別是開(kāi)頭句。因?yàn)榈谝挥∠笾匾剑?我練口語(yǔ)的時(shí)候看到過(guò)一段關(guān)于美國(guó)人的CHARACTER的短文就是:……Easily exicted,therefore Americans are always deceived by their impressions,which are only transient!),因此,寫(xiě)作文的時(shí)候我就想利用利用鬼子的弱點(diǎn),沒(méi)想到真靈了,MY GOD!當(dāng)然,一旦自己有了特色模板,還要用熟它,要和自己的論證聯(lián)貫。這樣才會(huì)讓鬼子覺(jué)得你不是在套用模板,而是自然流露。
另外,我不贊成以前很多人的觀點(diǎn)——千方百計(jì)地用GRE詞匯(所謂的難詞),首先我覺(jué)得鑒于對(duì)GRE難詞大多數(shù)人(牛人除外)只是認(rèn)識(shí)而已,未必用的準(zhǔn)確,用于句之中讓美國(guó)人覺(jué)得未必貼切。另外,難詞很難保證拼寫(xiě)對(duì),所以,我覺(jué)得從這角度說(shuō),用的難詞多未必好!我的作文沒(méi)有用太難詞,但是自我感覺(jué)還貼切,用了一些以前練過(guò)口語(yǔ)的地道短語(yǔ):比如LIFE IS FULL OF UPS AND DOWNS,A NEW BRAND OF…,這些都是鬼子掛在嘴邊的,又似乎很貼近他們的口味。
由于考前導(dǎo)師把我的研究課題換了(導(dǎo)致6-10月所有查的資料全白費(fèi)),因此,當(dāng)時(shí)很郁悶,一度產(chǎn)生放棄T的想法。但還是堅(jiān)持下來(lái)了。我也沒(méi)長(zhǎng)期練過(guò)作文,只是考前狂練了一周,每天三篇。最后各種套路的作文都有自己的特色模板,(這里所說(shuō)特色模板可以靠自己平常留心積累,我考試時(shí)第一段的開(kāi)頭就是引用托福真題里一篇閱讀里的一段開(kāi)頭,見(jiàn)99年1月第4篇閱讀第二段),把摸板練的很熟后,就有時(shí)間滕出想內(nèi)容。但我考試時(shí)的內(nèi)容好象很空,沒(méi)有具體事例,只是覺(jué)得連慣性還算好,句子還算通,長(zhǎng)短結(jié)合還行,語(yǔ)法和拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤較少,中國(guó)式英語(yǔ)句型少些而已。就從我的作文來(lái)看,內(nèi)容又似乎不是很重要了,因而我覺(jué)得考試時(shí)候的6分作文由于時(shí)間等關(guān)系,可能并沒(méi)有各種書(shū)里的范文那么好,因此大家不要太悲觀。
另外,我想說(shuō)的是,即使自己是只菜鳥(niǎo),也要對(duì)自己有信心,我五月的G只有2110(邏輯才650),但我一點(diǎn)都沒(méi)灰心!終于在T時(shí)撈了回來(lái)!另外,考試心態(tài)也要把持好,我記得五月考G復(fù)習(xí)時(shí)自我感覺(jué)非常好,但考前太緊張,考前一眼都沒(méi)合,再加上當(dāng)時(shí)對(duì)機(jī)井的期望過(guò)大,導(dǎo)致最后栽在邏輯上!相反,十月考托時(shí),考前也沒(méi)很多時(shí)間準(zhǔn)備,但心態(tài)很平穩(wěn),最終盡管T成績(jī)(620)沒(méi)平時(shí)高,但TWE卻超常發(fā)揮。自己也覺(jué)得很滿意。
我的6分原文:
Since most important issues are mutifaceted,there are alternatives to choose from,each with its unique advatanges and diaadvantages.The title statement,whether we should choose friends who are similar to us or those who are different from us,is not exceptional.To support one side between the two is a matter of balancing its pros and cons.As far as i am concerned, i would prefer to choose friends who are similar to us.AS we can see,simialr friends meansshavingssimilar characters,sharing more likes and dislikes,thus understanding each other more easily.When we are exposed to a new environment,we often feel depressed and frustrated,then we intend to seek our new brand of friends,especially those who are similar to us.I illurstrate this example just in an attempt to state one fact that we are inherently inclined to choose friends who are similar to us.The above reason is only one part ,another aspect of my reasons lies in the fact that friends who are similar to us are more helpful than those who are different from us.Life is full of ups and downs,when in trouble,we try to count on simialr friends for help in that the way they deal with difficulties may be more appropriate and comfortable to us .
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Admittedly,different friends are also very important and helpful to us. One extreme manifestation of its advantages is that we can learn more distinct merits from friends who are different from us.
If all these factors are contemplated,therefore,I think I would like to choose friends who are similar to us .
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