考研英語高分作文閃光點

2013考研英語高分作文閃光點

2013考研英語高分作文閃光點，作文是考研英語中得分較低的一種題型，究其原因，除了平時缺少練習(xí)之外，同學(xué)們還缺乏作文抓分技巧�？佳薪逃�網(wǎng)建議同學(xué)們需要掌握一定的作文模板，除此之外，如果能在作文中設(shè)置一些詞匯和句型的閃光點，必定使你的作文如虎添翼。

高分作文標志：

1、是否長短句交叉;2、是否會使用插入語;3、用詞是否多樣、準確、形象，盡量使用能夠吸引閱卷老師眼球的閃光詞;4、關(guān)鍵詞是否換用，切勿老用重復(fù)詞;5、句型使用是否準確、地道。

下面給出寫好一篇作文的注意事項：

1.適當用被動替換主動，這樣能更客觀地反映事實。句子開頭不要總是用we / I (比如寫結(jié)尾時不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to. )舉個經(jīng)典結(jié)尾的例子：It is ，therefore， high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. By doing so，its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.

2.善于使用插入語，比如說把副詞、連接詞等，作為插入語放在中間，一般放在主語、動詞或者助動詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號。如however / therefore /for example/I believe做插入語放在中間，一般放在動詞、助動詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號。舉例如下：Other individuals， however， take the attitude that…

3.一定要學(xué)會換詞，換形象，具體的替換太寬泛的。(考試中一般不要出現(xiàn)good， bad ， many， thing， think， people， opinion等等)比如第一條的例子中，applicable替換proper; approaches替換ways; implement替換carry out; sharpen one‘s competitive edge替換enhance one’s competitiveness(提高某物競爭力)。

下面舉一篇某位同學(xué)寫的優(yōu)秀作文的例子，看看他是如何運用各類寫作技巧的。這位同學(xué)把老師上課講的各類寫作手法，精彩替換和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提高。

I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present， which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that I indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ，and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless， feeling that the whole world belonged to me.

exceedingly替換very;(個人認為替換成overwhelmingly更出彩)

thrilling替換exciting;

sth. exerts a tremendous fascination on sb替換sb. be interested in sth;

google替換search;

an army of替換a lot of.

The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology， computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them， in large measure!

The dawn of the new century witnessed是一個精彩句型，用來描述在某個時期發(fā)生了什么事情;

Increasing popularity替換more and more popular;

Coincident with…非常地道的句型，表達“與…一致”的意思，替換With…;

Advancement替換development;

Pour into ( flood into / swarm into )替換enter into;

Current ( currently )替換now;

Appeal to sb.替換sb. be interested in sth.;

Growing individuals替換more and more people;

It is no exaggeration to say經(jīng)典句型，說某事是毫不夸張的。(it goes without exaggeration that更好)

For a start， we can， freely， search desired information at any moment . Little by little， our knowledge will be well enriched， and our horizons will be greatly broadened. Additionally， we can get huge recreations online by chatting， playing games， or delivering email.

For a start替換To begin with;

We can， freely， search用了插入語的寫作手法;

our knowledge will be well enriched， and our horizons will be greatly broadened.用了非常精彩的被動;

Additionally替換In addition / Besides;

Deliver替換send.

There is no denying that ， however， computers can function in the disservice of human beings， in a way， especially the growing violence ，***， porn pictures， AV-films emerging on the screen ， which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.

There is no denying that ， however， computers can function in the disservice of human beings，這個句子有三個精彩之處，首先There is no denying that這個句型;其次however作為插入語;再次，function in the disservice of替換do harm to.

Emerging替換appearing ( fading替換disappearing );

Net citizen網(wǎng)民，屬于精彩用詞。(直接用netizen更好)

As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds. Computers do play a positive role in the development of people' lives， despite a slice of unfavorable impacts. We should ，therefore， take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.

No garden has no weeds替換Every coin has two sides;

Computers do play，使用do表示強調(diào);

Positive替換important / good等;

A slice of替換a part of;

Unfavorable替換bad;

Impacts替換effects / influences;

We should， therefore， take advantage of…使用插入語;

Fruits (而且fruits用的非常形象，merits/ virtues)替換advantage ( defects替換disadvantage );

Facet替換aspect.

以下是45個最經(jīng)典的替換詞，各位同學(xué)可以參考一下：

1.individuals，characters， folks替換people ，persons.

2.positive， favorable， rosy (美好的)，promising (有希望的)，perfect， pleasurable ， excellent， outstanding， superior替換good.

3.dreadful， unfavorable， poor， adverse， ill (有害的)替換bad(如果bad做表語，可以有be less impressive替換。)

eg.An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games， enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms. When it approaches to graduation ，as a result， they find their academic records are less impressive.

4.an army of， an ocean of， a sea of， a multitude of ，a host of， many， if not most替換many.

注：用many， if not most一定要小心，many后一定要有詞。

Eg. Many individuals， if not most， harbor the idea that…。同理用most， if not all ，替換most.

5.a slice of， quiet a few替換some.

6.harbor the idea that， take the attitude that， hold the view that， it is widely shared that， it is universally acknowledged that替換think (因為是書面語，所以要加that)。

7.affair ，business ，matter替換thing.

8.shared代common .

9.reap huge fruits替換get many benefits.

10.for my part ，from my own perspective替換in my opinion.

11.Increasing(ly)，growing替換more and more(注意沒有g(shù)rowingly這種形式。所以當修飾名詞時用increasing/growing.修飾形容詞，副詞用increasingly

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