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高考英語滿分作文及評析(2)
【北京卷】
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請根據下面提示，寫一篇短文，詞數不少于50
In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following picture. You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it.
What an interesting picture! A western young man, sitting at a table, is ready to eat a bowl of noodles. He is holding two forks the same way as we Chinese hold chopsticks. He is trying so hard to pick up the noodles that he is sweating a lot. At first glance, I think it’s a bit funny, for we Chinese take for granted that chopsticks are the tools for eating noodles. The man in the picture is trying to copy us. Obviously he is doing it the hard way. Maybe using one fork will do a better job, In my opinion, we don’t need to copy others’ ways of thinking. Sometimes a simpler way of doing things may be a better way.
【名師點評】
本文是開放性作文，要求考生把握好圖畫內容，發(fā)散表達�？忌攸c要看出這個人是卷發(fā)高鼻的外國人，要體會到西式刀叉對中式食物的矛盾性。行文結構十分明晰，同時句式使用得熟練而準確。
【江蘇卷】
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鼠標是計算機時代最佳的人機交互工具之一。它極大地方便了人們的計算機操作。但是，過分依賴鼠標的習慣也會帶來一些不利影響。請你以鼠標為切入點，根據下表所提示的信息，用英語寫一篇短文。
鼠標的必要性對多數人來說，操作計算機，上網沖浪……
鼠標的便捷性點擊、移動、插入、拷貝、刪除……編輯文本，搜索信息……
收發(fā)郵件，選購商品……
點播音樂，下載電影……
如果過分依賴鼠標…… (請考生結合自身感受，列舉兩到三點)
注意：
1.對所給要點逐一陳述，適當發(fā)揮，不要簡單翻譯。
2.詞數150左右。開頭已經寫好，不計人總詞數。
3.作文中不得提及考生所在學校和本人姓名。
The mouse is a most effective device used by people to communicate with a computer.
For most people, it’s almost impossible to operate a computer without a mouse, let alone surf the Internet. A well-chosen mouse is really handy, flexible and convenient in controlling the screen. With the functions of inserting, deleting, moving and copying, it enables us to edit test, browse web page and download what we want. It can even bring us a flood of music, movies and PC games. Just imagine, all this can be done with a cute mouse.
A convenient tool can certainly make our work easier, but it doesn’t always help in a positive way. Too much ready information on our fingertips leaves little room for knowledge pursuing. Too many ready answers make us less excited in finding truth. Relying too much on mouse clicking makes us lazier and less creative both mentally and physically.
【名師點評】
本文為提綱式說明文體裁，所選內容與我們生活相關，考生只要把所給要點逐條陳述，適度發(fā)揮，不要逐條翻譯即可。文章說理清楚，語言流暢，句式表達多樣，用詞恰當、準確。不失為一篇滿分作文。
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