往年高考英語作文滿分回顧(2)

學(xué)人智庫 時(shí)間:2018-02-09 我要投稿
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  參考詞匯:

  · 推薦 recommend (V.)

  · 英漢/漢英詞典 The English-Chinese Chinese-English Dictionary (ECCED)

  · 新華字典 Xinhua Dictionary (XD)

  Dear Steve,

  I’m so pleased to learn that you and your classmates are learning Chinese.

  I’d like to recommend the following two dictionaries.

  The English-Chinese/Chinese-English Dictionary is really a good one for beginners. It has 18,000 English words and 20,000 Chinese words. Besides plenty of examples, it has many notes telling you bow to use a word. Xinhua dictionary is the most popular Chinese dictionary , and it has a vocabulary of 10,000 words. It may also be useful to some advanced learners of Chinese. Of the two, ECCED is the more expensive, costing 52 yuan, and XD costs 11 yuan.

  Please let me know if you want me to buy these dictionaries.

  Yours,

  Li Yue

  [名師點(diǎn)評(píng)]

  本文要完成的是書信的主要部分,因此不需要注意格式,但是不能遺漏要點(diǎn)。本文要點(diǎn)齊全,內(nèi)容完整,詳略得到。介紹的時(shí)候,層次清晰,逐一舉例。文章流暢而連貫。有很多關(guān)于詞匯和字典的表述,值得我們積累。

  【全國卷II】

  【試題回放】

  假設(shè)你是李華,加拿大一所學(xué)校將于今年暑假組織學(xué)生來你校訪問。其間,Andy Smith將借住你家。請(qǐng)你代表全家寫信給Andy,歡迎他的到來,并告知有關(guān)事宜。信的要點(diǎn)如下:

  1. 上午:學(xué);顒(dòng)2.下午:游覽市區(qū)3. 晚上:看電視,玩游戲,聊天

  注意:1. 詞數(shù):100左右2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫3. 參考詞匯:安排arrange

  Dear Andy,

  I’m so glad that you’ll be here with me and my family for the summer holiday. I’m writing to express our warm welcome and introduce the activities during your stay here.

  In the morning ,some activities at school will be arranged. You’ll visit our classrooms, reading rooms, labs, and so on. We’ll take this opportunity to exchange our views, talking about school life, and so on.

  In the afternoon, you can tour around the city. And I’ll act as your tour guide. Our city has changed a lot and takes on a new look. You can see what is our city like with your own eyes.

  At night , we can watch TV, play games and talk about what we’re interested in. I’m sure you’ll enjoy yourself. I’m looking forward to your coming.

  Yours sincerely,

  Li hua

  [名師點(diǎn)評(píng)]

  本文行文自然流暢,文章要點(diǎn)齊全,意思表達(dá)真切。詳略得當(dāng),重點(diǎn)突出。從語言使用的角度來說,不但使用了一些生動(dòng)的動(dòng)詞,準(zhǔn)確的名詞,同時(shí)為了使本文串聯(lián)自然,又使用了時(shí)間狀語為連接詞,將文章按照時(shí)間順序敘述完整。