英語求職信的寫作細節(jié)(2)

英語求職信的寫作細節(jié)(2)

　　三、提起或要求待遇時不要過分謙虛或表示歉意，下列句子不宜使用：

　　as for salary, i do not know what to say. would $4,500 a month be too much?

　　do you think i would be asking too much if i said 5,000 dollars a month?

　　you know what my services are worth better than i do. all i want is a living wage.

　　四、關于求職信的結尾用語，下面也有三組例句。每一組里面(1)句較差，經過修改后(2)句顯得比較恰當。

　　a:

　　(1)軟弱、羞怯的：if you think i can fill the position after you have read my letter, i shall be glad to talk with you.

　　(2)改寫后(較佳)：if my qualifications meet your standards, i would be happy to speak with you in person.

　　b:

　　(1)懷疑，不妥、不安全的：if you are interested, please let me know immediately, as i'm sure an interview will convince you i'm the man for the job.

　　(2)改寫后：i would like to request an interview. you can reach me by telephone at beijing 123456 between the hours of 7-9 a.m. and 5:30-9:30p.m. any evening.

　　c:

　　(1)哀求式的句子，不夠完整(漏掉面談時間)：i would appreciate the opportunity for an interview. i can be reached by calling beijing 12345678.

　　(2)改寫后：may i have the opportunity to discuss this matter further with you? my telephone number is beijing 12345678. you can reach me between nine and five o'clock during the day.

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